Saturday, October 27, 2007

Just a poem.....help with the title

It all started with that look
And ended with heart break


You had smiled at me
And I was the new girl
I was supposed to be invisible
But you noticed me anyway


Nobody else noticed me
Nobody looked my way or gave me a glance
But you did

A year later, things were the same
In the mornings, the rare ones
we would mutter hello
We would smile in the hall
Nothing much, something small


Another summer went by
I still felt the same
It was a crush for sure
My longest by far
Even though I never saw your face
For the longest time

School started again
But this time we talked more
I flirted, you did too
But still nothing happend

For some reason I said I was over you
My friends believed me for some reason
One of them told you of my crush
But you didn't care


And so the heartbreak began
And the crush grew
It was like the years before
Few words, few smiles


I guess I should have seen it coming
Avoided this feeling
But I didn't;

Was I too naive?

I don't know.
But I still like you....
In case you haven't guessed


And it all started with that look
And ended with heartbreak




No, that was NOT about me. It's about a girl that likes this boy for the longest time. Then about two years into the start of the crush, she starts to flirt with him. But she gets tired of it so she tells her friends that she is over him. And one of her friends tells him that she used to like him. Yet he doesn't care. And now she knows that her crush will never mean anything to him. And that she's just another wave in the ocean, leave on a tree, vapor in the wind, ect.

Yeah, I know it's sad. Can you help me name it? I feel like writing sad stuff :P. Nothing much going on. Call me if you want to talk. I'm sorry I couldn't go to Quest everybody. I'm sure I'll see you sometime Issa. I'll post soon


~ Abby

1 comment:

forever.and.always. said...

we missed you <3 but we'll have to hang out soon.. definitely

i really like it! hmm... title....

im not that creative right now... but i'll be thinking