Judgement

Awwwwwwwwwwww! You guys are so sweet and forgiving :) So thanx. I am going to type some part of another story. I think it is going to be near the end :

She said to him,"Why are you in here?" He turned around and pointed his gun.
"I'm going to ask you one question. Answer it a way I don't like and you'll be dead before you can say 'that was a mistake'. Answer it any other way and...I'll let you go."
"What's the question?" asked Ally.
I could see her shaking in fear behind her super-ficial mask she was hiding behind. I knew it was just a cover-up so she didn't seem meak or weak. But she was strong no matter how scared she really was.
"The question is...Are you a Christian? I mean, Do you believe in God?"
"What do you mean? There are many types of Christians out there, Disciples, Catholics, and Presbyterian ones to name a few. But if your asking if I am a disciple of God..."
"Yes. That is the question. Now answer before a shoot you for talking to long."
"To tell the truth, I know your going to shoot me if I answer the question truthfully. Please give me a second please," she turned and looked straight at me,"Kristin, tell everyone not that I love them but if they wouldn't take my place right now and die for God in my place, then they are not a TRUE christian. I am not going to deny the lord. It is my turn to go. I am a disciple of God, let his will be done, not mine."
A shot rang out across the library and Ally fell to the ground, dead. Peter fled through the door way, running for his life, knowing he had to get away or he would die for commiting murder. I walked over to where Ally lay and on her face there was a smile. Not a smile like she was happy to leave her enemies or like she had tricked someone but a genuine smile because she had done what she had needed to do for God in life.

So what do you think??? I don't know about it but I think it is ok so far. If you can't tell, it would be a Christian story. It will be called Judgement. So ya. Thanx for forgiving me everyone. Even if u would have done the same....still thank you for forgiveness. It is one of the best gifts I have ever recieved. Well I have to get off. Lots of Love you guys. ~Abby~